To be with you, all is well
Without you, all is hell
How I feel without you
Like there’s no fire in hell
I can express myself with tears
But with words, it’s hard to tell
Every single pore of my body
cries and screams like a church-bell
I know reality is bitter
And my dreams have no spell
I know you have chains on your feet
And I’m a prisoner of a dark well
You are a part of me forever
How come I can make you expel ?
My love for you will never decrease
I loved you,I do love you and I shall
If you are mine, then even hell is heaven
Without you my heaven is like a hell
YAZ
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Thank you for this beautiful words!😀
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Thank you Martina 🙂
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Wonderful and amazing.
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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If you are mine, then even hell is heaven
Without you my heaven is like a hell
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Thank you so much for sharing 🙂
I really appreciate it ..happy new year
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Strong love. So deep.in love. Beautiful.
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Thank you Corrie always 🙂
I really appreciate it ..thanks for your sweet and kind words
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Such a poinant piece and.beautiful.
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The rhyme in your poems is always superb.
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Thank you so much 😊
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Oh wow such beautiful words! My heart tugged! ☺️
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Thank you very much Rebecca dawn 🙂
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You are so welcome!
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Feelings expressed so Beautifully.
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You always write with such depth, Yaz.
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Thanks for your compliment 🙂
I really appreciate it
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Thank you so much for sharing 🙂
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Every line is packed with love and passion!
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When words come out from the heart they find place in others hearts 🙂
Thank you so much
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wow… you are a poet!! beautiful words!
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Thank you so much For Your compliment ..I really appreciate it 🙂
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My Brother, My Bard,
this didn’t tug at my heart,
It felt like a huge piece of machinery ripped into my chest,
took a strangle-hold on my heart,
then ripped it out,
but leaving a huge empty void.
While it feels almost painful to even think, much less remember,
I didn’t come empty handed Yaz:
I nominated you for The Sunshine Blogger Award, you can see the details here:
http://notinmyworld.org/2016/01/14/child-abuse-353/
Sincerely,
Robert
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Thank you so much brother .i really appreciate it ..thanks for the nomination ..I feel honored
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Yaz, My Brother, I was honored when Our pathways through this life was allowed to intersect, and we were allowed to travel the same path if only for a short time.
You are very welcome My Friend, My Bard.
Sincerely,
Robert
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One word – beautiful!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Experience is the great teacher of our lives, but the heart is the compass. Always beautiful to read your work. ❤
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Thank you very much Rachel 🙂
Yes you are right ..heart is the compass and we should follow our heart
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Beautifully written this bittersweet poem.
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Thank you very much 🙂
I appreciate it
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You can feel the love in every line you wrote!!
I especially liked the rhyming scheme of it! 😀
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Thank you so much Steph ..I appreciate it 🙂
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Welcome to 2016
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Thanks happy new year
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WOW! S0 So… so deeply.
Romantic words!
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Thank you so much Cristina 🙂
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Just lovely!!
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Thank you Stephanae 🙂
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You’re welcome 😀
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a fantastic artwork.Love it a lot
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Thank you so much 🙂
I appreciate it
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Like button don’t upload, but I like this 🙂
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Thank you so much Anna 🙂
Yaz
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Beautiful🍁🍂🍃🌾
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Thank you Deanne😊
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You’re very welcome💜
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Thanks for sharing such soul inspiring poems. This particular poem brought tears into my eyes. I love it. Thank you once again.
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When the words come out from the Heart ,They find place in other Hearts ..rumi
Many many thanks ..I really appreciate it
Yaz
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Thank you very much for sharing 😊
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Thank you for your words 🙂
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