Love is a game, that’s why
There are so many players
A house is on fire and
A man is having an affair
The Woman is working hard
While her babies are being raised in daycare
Relationship becomes Relationshit
If you are not sincerer
Clubs and bars are full
Churches are empty on Sunday prayer
The Poor are taxpayers
The Rich people are on welfare
Every pretty woman is looking for Richard Gere
Humans become angels
when they care and share
YAZ
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How beautiful!
Have a lovely weekend 🙂
Love and light!
Anand 🙂
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Thanks Anand 🙂
You too
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Welcome 🙂
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Lovely,
Touching.
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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Ur Welcome.
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Another terrific one Yaz.
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Thank you sooo much Corrie for your sweet words
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Sincerer, isn’t that the truth. Great poem.
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Thanks Wendy ..humanity stands on sincerity
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I agree, the recent wave of popular sarcasm, and selfishness leaves a big scar on relationships.
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good but disturbin: thank goodness for the last two lines 🙂
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It’s a bit disenchanted, but the last two verses allow the hope
In friendhip
Michel
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This poem is based on true story of my friend 😦
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Today the world is so complicated. we forget to enjoy the simplicity and innocence. Is our reality.
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Yes that is true
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It’s on going and unseen battle between relations
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Yes! But everything depends on us… we are what we want to be…
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No doubt about it ..well said
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Lovely…
And somewhere between all of these extremes ….pure love is waiting for humanity, outside of its romantic and game like concepts.
A beautiful write, thank you.
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Thanks a lot 😉
That’s right
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lovely
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Thanks Kelley 🙂
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You make amazing poems. How do you come up with these ideas? It takes me up to an hour sometimes just coming up with something to write, and I don’t even write poetry. Tips?
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Thanks a lot ….to be honest it’s all GOD gifted
I am nothing I just write 🙂
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Hi Yaz
Beautifully sad. True perception of many lives. I hope you are doing well. I pray for you.
🙂
M
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Thanks a lot Melinda 🙂
Yes all is well
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Another beautiful poem Yaz. I loved it.
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Thanks a lot For Your sweet And Kind words i really appreciate it
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🙂
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Powerful and wonderful.
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Thanks you very much 🙂
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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Thanks for that! Enjoy the day
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Thanks 🙂
Tengas un buen día
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Igualmente
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Love this poem. Especially love the last two lines: “Humans become angels when they care and share.”
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Thanks a lot ..I truly appreciate it
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Such truth in your words.
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Thank you so much Rachel 🙂
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Here’s to more angels!!!
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Very well said. You touched on a lot of seemingly complex issues and distilled them back to basic practical wisdom. Well done!
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Thank you so much 🙂
I really appreciate it
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A true reflection on life as it stands. A good one. Thanks for stopping by my blog.
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The last two lines are the key.
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E’ sempre un gran piacere sostare sulle tue pagine creative
Un saluto,silvia
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Todo es in regalo de Dios 🙂
Gracias Silvia
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“Humans become angels
when they care and share”
This I liked.
Shiva
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That’s right 🙂
Thanks Shiva
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Reblogged this on 2l2phant.
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Thank you so much for sharing 🙂
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really enjoyed your poem…so heartfelt….thanks for your words……kat
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Thanks a lot Kat 🙂
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I enjoy your poems….very moving…well done
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Thank you so much
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E’ sempre un piacere sostare sulle tue emozionanti pagine
Buon fine settimana e un saluto,silvia
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Hmmm…sad but so true. I agree that we can be angels if we choose to be better than the norm.
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That’s exactly 🙂 you are so right
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Thank you so much For sharing 🙂
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It is a very lovely poem, from beginning to end, but the last two lines resonated with me the most. I am often in amazement when someone is willing to lend a helping hand. After they have done so, I don’t see them the same, they are somehow brighter…well said Yaz. Thank you for sharing ☺
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Thank you so much for your sweet and kind words ..I really appreciate it
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you are so true with that…..society has changed a lot…
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i love this so much, great piece of work
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Thank you so much Andrea 🙂
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Thank you so much for sharing .
I really appreciate it 🙂
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Of course! It is a wonderful poem, just like so many I’ve seen from you!
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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Of course!
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Your poem shows an ambivalence many of us are feeling. We are seeing l’envers des choses.
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Thank you Michelline 🙂
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