Don’t we all wish we could find that someone who suddenly makes our life perfect but if we’re truly honest with ourselves, we need to make those changes ourselves and take some responsibility for where we are and improving our road. That is something I’ve come to appreciate as I grown older (but not OLD, mind you!) I have also wondered about some of those admirers I didn’t notice because I was too focused on Mr UNattainable, which also was a bit of a self-protection thing. So many thoughts and a great poem/song xx Rowena
I am now 46 and I’ve just finished reading a fabulous novel where the protagonist is 19 and it’s made me rethink a lot of things. I used to be looking for everything you write about but now I see the importance of being resilient. Not self-sufficient because most of us want to be with others and love people but to build sufficient inner character to handle the jolts of life xx Rowena
Very, very pretty, Yaz! … as he let go of his pride to pick up the rocks, her beauty was revealed to her, deep in her heart; he served her as the woman that he knew she could be, and through his love, evolved her beautiful identity. Pride will shackle her; fearless demonstrations of love will set her free!
My Friend, as always, your words move me.
I have something for you, I have nominated you for the One Lovely Blog Award, and you can see the rules here: http://notinmyworld.org/2015/10/21/blogging/
Your Friend and Brother,
Robert
My Friend and Brother, I have got to do a post to all Our Friends, and let all of you know how I have let all of the Friends down, BUT I have already resolved to do much better.
My Brother, it is an Honor that Our pathways through life intersected, it is a pleasure meeting and getting to know even a tiny bit, such a writer as yourself.
I hope you don’t mind, but you are the first person I have ever been inclined to call you a Bard, or liken you to one. Does it bother you My Friend????
Robert
Great poem ;flows gently yet passionately like a wave in the ocean , i going to do this for myself hold my own hand , remove all the rocks , feel the sun , walk in barefeet oh such great words for meditation thank you ,
The Falling Thoughts 
Wish that could happen ❤😊 Lovely poem ❤
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Thank you hasmeet 🙂
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simply beautiful!
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Lovely!
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Thank you Cindy 🙂
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This was good! Homerun!
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🙂 thank you Michael
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Such a beautiful and loving poem. Beautiful mind Yaz, keep it up.
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Thank you so much Corrie 🙂
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Picking up the rocks so she can walk barefoot….the sweetest gesture.
That made me smile
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Too true….Well said! 🙂
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Thank you Bushka 🙂
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Such lovely images!
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Thank you Carol 🙂
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So sweet!
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Thank you 🙂
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Very nice! I love how thought provoking your writing always is, no matter the topic.
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Ah thank you so much Elizabeth .its all God gifted
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I can tell! God bless!
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This makes me think of children, the first love. Very sweet 🙂
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Don’t we all wish we could find that someone who suddenly makes our life perfect but if we’re truly honest with ourselves, we need to make those changes ourselves and take some responsibility for where we are and improving our road. That is something I’ve come to appreciate as I grown older (but not OLD, mind you!) I have also wondered about some of those admirers I didn’t notice because I was too focused on Mr UNattainable, which also was a bit of a self-protection thing. So many thoughts and a great poem/song xx Rowena
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You thoughts gave me an idea to write something about this topic .you are right
Thank you so much Rowena 🙂
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I am now 46 and I’ve just finished reading a fabulous novel where the protagonist is 19 and it’s made me rethink a lot of things. I used to be looking for everything you write about but now I see the importance of being resilient. Not self-sufficient because most of us want to be with others and love people but to build sufficient inner character to handle the jolts of life xx Rowena
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Well said Roweee.
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Awesome!
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Thank you 🙂
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“Let me move those clouds
So you can feel the sun…”
Such a beautiful romantic use of words to express such deep feelings. Love it.
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Thank you Debbie 🙂
I really appreciate it
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Great thoughts and great rhyme!
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Thank you very much 🙂
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Beautifully written
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Thank you MANN 🙂
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Pleasure is mine 🙂
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For a lover nothing is impossible , this is what this warm poem says .
On friendship
Michel
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That’s exactly is 🙂
Thank you Michel
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Lovely!
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Thank you Jerrod 🙂
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I love words! you are very creative and sensitive
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Thank you so much Cristina:)
To be honest it’s all God gifted
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I agree with everybodys comments. Lovely poem!
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Thank you very much Anna 🙂
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😀
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When we’re running after one person, would it even matter if the whole world is running after us?
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But running in circle will never take us anywhere
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That is somehow true but then just keep moving,anywhere.
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But do that person even care about us ?and know our presence
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It shouldn’t matter if its true.
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Very beautiful! Love this declaration of true love.
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Thank you very much 🙂
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Very, very pretty, Yaz! … as he let go of his pride to pick up the rocks, her beauty was revealed to her, deep in her heart; he served her as the woman that he knew she could be, and through his love, evolved her beautiful identity. Pride will shackle her; fearless demonstrations of love will set her free!
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Thank you so much Tina 🙂
You nailed it ..thats right
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Absolutely lovely and right in the center of the heart!
With your permission, I’ll share it on my Facebook wall.
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Thank you so much for your sweet and kind words 🙂
Off course sharing is caring 🙂
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it true ..sometimes we neglect the people behind us…
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So very true…its very necessary to have the ME time.
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Very eloquently put! It is so important to have a realistic view of our relationships, and not get caught up in tunnel vision chasing after one goal.
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Thank you so much 🙂
You are so right I like that
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Oooh, juicy thought.
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🙂 haha
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My Friend, as always, your words move me.
I have something for you, I have nominated you for the One Lovely Blog Award, and you can see the rules here:
http://notinmyworld.org/2015/10/21/blogging/
Your Friend and Brother,
Robert
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Ah thank you so much brother
I feel honored .thanks for the nomination .i really appreciate it
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My Friend and Brother, I have got to do a post to all Our Friends, and let all of you know how I have let all of the Friends down, BUT I have already resolved to do much better.
My Brother, it is an Honor that Our pathways through life intersected, it is a pleasure meeting and getting to know even a tiny bit, such a writer as yourself.
I hope you don’t mind, but you are the first person I have ever been inclined to call you a Bard, or liken you to one. Does it bother you My Friend????
Robert
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Thank a lot for your sweet and kind words Robert
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Very sweet. 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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I understand. I don’t feel appreciated by the one who chase me.
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Reblogged this on 2l2phant.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Thank you for sharing!!
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It took me seven years to finally see. Beautiful work.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Beautiful. That´s all there is to say here;-)
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Thank you so much 🙂
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E’ sempre un gran piacere soffermarsi sul tuo espressivo blog
Un caro saluto
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Ay gracias que dios te bendigas 🙂
Un caro saluto
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Great poem ;flows gently yet passionately like a wave in the ocean , i going to do this for myself hold my own hand , remove all the rocks , feel the sun , walk in barefeet oh such great words for meditation thank you ,
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That’s a beautiful comment 🙂
Thanks for your sweet words I really appreciate it .
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Simple words, imaged verses make the most charming poetry of love .
Add music and you will have a Renaissance song.
In friendship
Michel
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Thank you so much Michel .i appreciate that 🙂
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You did well with this one. Great poem, with lots of love.
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Thanks a lot xara Nahara 😊
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Your name is Xara ? Or Sara 😊
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Both, technically. Xara is my pen name, and Sara is my name in Spanish.
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That’s what I thought 😊
Hablas español ?
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Un poco, actualmente. Hablo mucho mejor en ingles.
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aw Bueno 😊 Pero escribiste perfecto ..
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Gracias. A veces no se’ la palabra quiero usar. Y a veces no puedo conjugar en el subjunctivo.
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Jaja no importa 🙂
Solamente tiene que practicar ..de donde eres ?
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Estoy de Los Estados Unidos. Soy una Americana. De donde eres?
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Aw yo pensaba que eres latina 🙂
Yo soy cubano canadiense
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Un poco, si. Tenemos muchos Latinos en Los Estados Unidos. Eres Cubano Canadianense? 😀
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Si yo soy 🙂
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¡Que un combinación bueno!
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Muchas gracias 😊
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No hay de que.
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Ther’s a lot love and romantic in this poem of
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Thank you so much 🙂
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