You and I

August 8, 2015 · by Words Warrior · in love poem, Love Poems, poetry, romance. ·

1 pillow and 2 heads
2 bodies and 1 bed
4 eyes and 1 blink
2 paths and 1 link
2 hearts and 1 beat
1 step and 4 feet
2 souls and 1 life
1 cut with 2 knives
2 stars and 1 moon
1 plate and 2 spoons
2 branches and 1 tree
2 rivers and 1 sea
2 lives and 1 heart
2 brains and 1 thought

Yaz

110 responses to “You and I”

Amanda Ricks @surprisinglives.net August 8, 2015 at 4:29 pm · · Reply →

Beautiful. 🙂

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- Words Warrior August 8, 2015 at 4:32 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you Amanda 🙂
  
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neha(guddu) August 8, 2015 at 4:42 pm · · Reply →

lovely !!!
very nice !!

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- Words Warrior August 8, 2015 at 4:43 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you Neha 🙂
  
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Aurélie Sterntau August 8, 2015 at 5:12 pm · · Reply →

Wow, so lovely. ❤️

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- Words Warrior August 8, 2015 at 5:17 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you so much Aurélie 🙂
  
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John August 8, 2015 at 5:49 pm · · Reply →

I really liked this. Had a sort of “squeeee” moment that I am not all that proud of when I reached the end.

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- Words Warrior August 8, 2015 at 5:51 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you john 🙂
  I am glad you liked it
  
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Looking for the Light August 8, 2015 at 5:59 pm · · Reply →

Hi Yaz
Beautiful.
Hope you are doing well.
M

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- Words Warrior August 8, 2015 at 6:04 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you Melinda 🙂
  All is well and you ?
  
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Erika Kind August 8, 2015 at 8:16 pm · · Reply →

That was simply wonderful! A beautiful way to say “we are two indivuals but one heart/soul”.

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- Words Warrior August 8, 2015 at 8:18 pm · · Reply →
  
  exactly 🙂
  Thank you Erika
  
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  - Erika Kind August 8, 2015 at 8:24 pm · ·
    
    Very welcome 🙂
    
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Sarah Ferguson August 8, 2015 at 8:21 pm · · Reply →

Just wonderful.

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- Words Warrior August 8, 2015 at 8:22 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you Sarah 🙂
  
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NJ August 8, 2015 at 8:37 pm · · Reply →

With few words you have perfectly defined true love 🙂 beautiful 🙂

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- Words Warrior August 8, 2015 at 8:51 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you NJ 🙂
  I am glad you liked it
  
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  - NJ August 8, 2015 at 9:16 pm · ·
    
    🙂
    
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jiminpanama August 8, 2015 at 11:58 pm · · Reply →

Being in love is wonderful. I’m such a sucker 🙂

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- Words Warrior August 9, 2015 at 12:29 am · · Reply →
  
  Love is great love and to be loved
  
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Carol Balawyder August 9, 2015 at 2:27 am · · Reply →

I liked this. I thought it was very clever. 🙂

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- Words Warrior August 9, 2015 at 2:35 am · · Reply →
  
  Thank you Carol 🙂
  For your sweet comment
  
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Carisa Adrienne August 9, 2015 at 2:45 am · · Reply →

This is beautiful!

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- Words Warrior August 9, 2015 at 2:59 am · · Reply →
  
  Thank you Carisa 🙂
  
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terrepruitt August 9, 2015 at 5:51 am · · Reply →

Oh, so beautiful.
Where do you get your photos?

(Pssst: knives . . I am THEE WORST at spelling and grammar so fell free to help ME out!)

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- Words Warrior August 9, 2015 at 6:14 am · · Reply →
  
  Thank you for correction 🙂
  
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reocochran August 9, 2015 at 8:58 am · · Reply →

So romantic and full if love ♡ and hope! ☆

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- Words Warrior August 9, 2015 at 2:28 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you for your sweet words.i really appreciate it 🙂
  
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Alisha August 9, 2015 at 11:35 am · · Reply →

That was pretty sweet!

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- Words Warrior August 9, 2015 at 2:26 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you Alisha 🙂
  
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Darshith Badiyani August 9, 2015 at 8:31 pm · · Reply →

1 word.. Awesome 😉

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- Words Warrior August 9, 2015 at 8:39 pm · · Reply →
  
  Hahaha thank you darshith 😊
  
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Jay August 10, 2015 at 3:13 am · · Reply →

Very evocative imagery.

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- Words Warrior August 10, 2015 at 4:37 am · · Reply →
  
  Thank you jay 🙂
  
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lamarrwenrich August 10, 2015 at 5:36 am · · Reply →

Awww.. I love this.. Quite romantic

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- Words Warrior August 10, 2015 at 6:00 am · · Reply →
  
  Thank you 🙂
  I am glad you liked it
  
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laughtermedicineforthesoul August 10, 2015 at 7:25 pm · · Reply →

Uniquely powerful! Love it!

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- Words Warrior August 10, 2015 at 7:34 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you so much 🙂
  
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lynettedavis August 11, 2015 at 4:43 am · · Reply →

Love this!

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- Words Warrior August 11, 2015 at 1:00 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you 🙂
  
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Ginni Deville August 11, 2015 at 4:16 pm · · Reply →

Loved this poem..it brought a smile to my face 🙂

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- Words Warrior August 11, 2015 at 4:29 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you Ginni 🙂
  
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Stephanae V. McCoy August 11, 2015 at 4:27 pm · · Reply →

Beautiful!

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- Words Warrior August 11, 2015 at 4:30 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you stephanae 🙂
  
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  - Stephanae V. McCoy August 11, 2015 at 5:09 pm · ·
    
    You’re welcome.
    
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Alexander Lautsyus August 14, 2015 at 5:29 pm · · Reply →

Briliant!!!

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- Words Warrior August 14, 2015 at 5:39 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thanks Alexander 🙂
  
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Key Image Photographers August 16, 2015 at 9:22 am · · Reply →

Like the accompanying photograph! Very well chosen image to match well chosen words 🙂

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- Words Warrior August 16, 2015 at 2:26 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you so much
  Your comment is artistic like you 🙂 I really appreciate it
  
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  - Key Image Photographers August 17, 2015 at 5:05 am · ·
    
    Thank you 🙂
    
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Smorgasbord - Variety is the Spice of Life. August 16, 2015 at 9:50 am · · Reply →

Reblogged this on Smorgasbord – Variety is the spice of life and commented:
A poem about love… no moon or stars but everyday actions and items that represent the unity between two people in sync.

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Gigi Sedlmayer August 16, 2015 at 11:23 pm · · Reply →

Beautiful said with easy words

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- Words Warrior August 16, 2015 at 11:37 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you Gigi 🙂
  
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Pam Witzemann August 17, 2015 at 4:56 am · · Reply →

Wonderful…I loved the thought and the rhythm. Very original.

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- Words Warrior August 17, 2015 at 1:02 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you Pam 🙂
  
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BeanzBeBloggin' August 17, 2015 at 8:31 am · · Reply →

Deep yet simple. Beautifully conceived and wonderfully narrated. Looking forward to some good reads :). Nice to bump into you through this one. God bless.

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- Words Warrior August 17, 2015 at 1:02 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you so much 🙂
  
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macjam47 August 17, 2015 at 11:28 pm · · Reply →

I love this poem. It is so unique in form, but powerful in expression.

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- Words Warrior August 17, 2015 at 11:36 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you so much 🙂
  
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blessedart1111 August 19, 2015 at 5:40 am · · Reply →

Simply beautiful! thanks for sharing.

Be A Blessing!

LaTrice

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- Words Warrior August 19, 2015 at 5:43 am · · Reply →
  
  Thank you 🙂
  
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Liz S. Albania August 21, 2015 at 6:08 am · · Reply →

Precisely 💐🌷💐
The importance of being together with one goal, one mind and one spirit.
The assurance of staying with each other no matter comes their way 💖💗💖
That’s love is all about 💞💓💕

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Lynz Real Cooking August 21, 2015 at 6:25 pm · · Reply →

Lovely

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- Words Warrior August 21, 2015 at 6:28 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you Lynz 🙂
  
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  - Lynz Real Cooking August 21, 2015 at 6:28 pm · ·
    
    Your welcome
    
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Suzanne August 22, 2015 at 2:46 am · · Reply →

I really enjoyed this one. Very creative!
Thanks for your attention to my blog at learningtocry.wordpress.com
: )

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- Words Warrior August 22, 2015 at 1:42 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you Suzanne 🙂
  
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roweeee August 22, 2015 at 1:36 pm · · Reply →

Incredible! Very clever!

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- Words Warrior August 22, 2015 at 1:43 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you so much 🙂
  
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hasmeetwrites August 23, 2015 at 5:00 pm · · Reply →

Dream. Just a dream.

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- Words Warrior August 23, 2015 at 5:05 pm · · Reply →
  
  Dreams make us moving 🙂
  
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  - hasmeetwrites August 23, 2015 at 5:06 pm · ·
    
    It will always remain a dream coz I was the one who left him..
    
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  - Words Warrior August 23, 2015 at 5:09 pm · ·
    
    there are some nightmare as well ..isn’t it ?
    
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  - hasmeetwrites August 23, 2015 at 5:10 pm · ·
    
    I really hope it was. I hope I did the right thing. 😊 Nightmare! Yes 😊 thanks 😊
    
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  - Words Warrior August 23, 2015 at 5:13 pm · ·
    
    Hey journey is more important than destination 🙂
    
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  - hasmeetwrites August 23, 2015 at 5:14 pm · ·
    
    This journey is exhausting.
    
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  - Words Warrior August 23, 2015 at 5:22 pm · ·
    
    Life is like roller coaster you can feel scary or scream with joy but at the you will be all good ..so just enjoy your journey 🙂
    
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  - Words Warrior August 23, 2015 at 5:28 pm · ·
    
    And that roller coaster has a lot of ups and downs so just enjoy your ride 🙂 lol
    
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  - hasmeetwrites August 23, 2015 at 5:34 pm · ·
    
    I will. 😊 It’s not the end of the world. I got to learn a lot 😊
    
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Hodgepodge 4 the Soul™ August 25, 2015 at 11:02 pm · · Reply →

My heart skipped a beat as I read this-very lovely.

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- Words Warrior August 25, 2015 at 11:05 pm · · Reply →
  
  Ah Thank you so much:)
  
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  - Hodgepodge 4 the Soul™ August 25, 2015 at 11:45 pm · ·
    
    made me blush actually
    
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  - Words Warrior August 25, 2015 at 11:49 pm · ·
    
    Lol thats sweeet 🙂
    
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charlypriest August 26, 2015 at 7:19 am · · Reply →

This was great, very unique and smartly written.

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penneyvanderbilt August 26, 2015 at 5:28 pm · · Reply →

Reblogged this on Crazy Pasta Child.

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Joyful2bee August 27, 2015 at 12:00 am · · Reply →

Love this!

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- Words Warrior August 27, 2015 at 12:03 am · · Reply →
  
  Thank you 🙂
  
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New Journey August 27, 2015 at 7:18 pm · · Reply →

One pen reaches many…..enjoyed your poem.. Kathy

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- Words Warrior August 27, 2015 at 7:44 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you Kathy 🙂
  
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calensariel August 27, 2015 at 9:18 pm · · Reply →

Simple and beautiful. Just lovely!

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- Words Warrior August 27, 2015 at 9:19 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you so much 🙂
  
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litebeing August 28, 2015 at 7:46 pm · · Reply →

simply beautiful poem. thanks for your follow.

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- Words Warrior August 28, 2015 at 8:15 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you 🙂
  
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sheldonk2014 August 28, 2015 at 11:53 pm · · Reply →

Great piece love the idea
Great ending
As always Sheldon

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- Words Warrior August 29, 2015 at 12:38 am · · Reply →
  
  Thank you so much Sheldon 🙂
  
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The Accidental Poet August 30, 2015 at 12:36 am · · Reply →

I really enjoyed your poem. It’s clever. It flows well. Hope to see more from you. Thanks for visiting my blog.

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- Words Warrior August 30, 2015 at 6:31 am · · Reply →
  
  Thank you 🙂
  
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spearfruit August 30, 2015 at 12:57 pm · · Reply →

Powerful!

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- Words Warrior August 30, 2015 at 6:09 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you 🙂
  
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vrushali21 September 3, 2015 at 9:42 am · · Reply →

Awesome poem..!

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- Words Warrior September 3, 2015 at 1:25 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you so much 🙂
  
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Aufgewacht September 18, 2015 at 5:52 pm · · Reply →

👍😃

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Benedicta September 21, 2015 at 7:34 am · · Reply →

There is so much beauty in simplicity! Love the post!

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- Words Warrior September 21, 2015 at 12:42 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you so much 🙂
  
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Alka October 2, 2015 at 10:23 pm · · Reply →

Beautiful poem!

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- Words Warrior October 2, 2015 at 11:44 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you Alka 🙂
  
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pixieannie November 5, 2015 at 9:55 pm · · Reply →

It skipped and danced across the page. You brought this to life in such an amazing way.

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- Words Warrior November 5, 2015 at 11:06 pm · · Reply →
  
  Thank you so much for your sweet words 🙂
  I really appreciate it
  
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