Let me talk in tears
in a way …….
You don’t want to hear
My hands are cuffed
My heart is on your spear
My soul is asking me
Where is your dear
Why did you go so far
When I need you here
Let me talk in silence
In a way …….
You don’t want to hear
Life goes on and time passes by
Words are falling on deaf ears
I was expecting your attack from the front
You stabbed me from the rear
YAZ
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Great Thing! Regards!
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Thank you 🙂
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Nice post! Reminded me of conversations that I’ve needed to have with others! Painful, but necessary!
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Thank you freebryd 🙂
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Oh this made me cry…
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Seems like the person I’m missing the most is saying all these things to me.. Very touching. Great post 👌
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Nice 🙂
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Thank you Carisa 🙂
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nice post, well written and thoughtful!
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Thank you Lynz 🙂
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Exquisite
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Wow, that was a pretty deeply felt poem.
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Thank you Erika 🙂
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You are very welcome 🙂
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Words of pain, anger and longing. How lucky we are to be able to feel.
Have a great evening.
M
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Great, wise words.
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Thank you jay 🙂
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I can feel your emotions projected onto the words and the pictures of the punctured heart shaped bullet hole.
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🙂 ending caught me by surprise ..
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The header picture is awesome!
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Excellent! I wrote poetry in High School 30 years ago. I have only one poem since then.
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Thank you ..you should write and bring it out your hidden poet 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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What a deeply sensitive and moving poem. Thank you for your recent follows. I’ll look forward to reading more of your work. Chevvy
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Thank you chevvy 🙂
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You’re welcome:-)
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I’ve lived through this one! Great poem!
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Thank you 🙂
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Beautiful
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Thank you 🙂
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beautiful….good night, Greetje
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Thank you 🙂
Good night
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Wow, this brought back memories of how I once felt.
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Very nice poem! 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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waw… this is a lovely and beautiful creation… 🙂
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Thank you Ashish 🙂
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talking in tears… very moving thought..nice work, I feel your heartfelt passion. when words speak in feeling you know its working… This is my first visit to your blog, I am looking forward to reading much more! Thank you for reading my poem, always appreciated. 🙂 Namaste, Michelle
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Thank you Michelle 🙂
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Beautifully expressed
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Thank you so much:)
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That image is so powerful. It reminds me of activism during wartime, like putting flowers into the barrels of guns.
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“In LOVE the stab is from the Rear.
To make themselves not to Hear.
That is why the Action is so Clear.”
But accept lots of Love from Me YAZ from the front.
Shiva
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Thank you shiva 🙂
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Such sadness…. Another emotional poem….thank you for your words…
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Gives new meaning to broken heart!
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Its those rear attacks that hurt the worse..
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That’s true
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Love it❤️
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Thank you Christina 🙂
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Rear attacks leave an awful wound that doesn’t heal easily.
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rear attacks makes it difficult to seat 😦 I felt the broken hurt in this. Succinctly said.
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why do words always fall on deaf ears
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:))
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Beautiful man …
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Thank you 🙂
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An excellent combination of heading photo and poem that can stand alone, but together have become very powerful indeed.
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Thank you Johanna 🙂
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Beautiful expression of emotions and thoughts. 🙂
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Thank you so much 🙂
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I feel so touched and so shaken…
This poem is so emotional.
That’s how I love poetry: with lots of emotion and passion.
You are an honest poet and you are a great one.
I am very excited to read more of your writings 🙂
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Thank you so much 🙂
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very touchy and everybody’s’ thinking——— great post Wordwarrior
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Thank you so much Tanveer:)
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very welcome warrior 🙂
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Deep thoughts and lovely as always
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Lovely and deep thought as I have come to expect when you write 🙂
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Thank you sooo much for your sweet words ..I really appreciate it 🙂
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A very poetic depiction of a broken heart… I love it. 🙂
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Thank you so much 🙂
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You are welcome.
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Wonderful writing. Very emotional and thoughtful but sad. Even down to earth and real. You have a passion for your poems that is refreshing and real. Thank you for sharing with the rest of us.
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Thank you so much for your sweet words .i really appreciate it 🙂
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Beautiful poem, & thoughts. I’m looking forward to seeing more of your work.
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Thank you so much Karen 🙂
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Thank you so much for sharing 🙂
I really appreciate it
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Thanks for choosing to follow me. I hope to get back on the stick soon and renew my entries.
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Thank you 🙂
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I can empathsize with that part “when i need you here” it speaks of a bit of reminissence. Beautiful simple yet complex poem.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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I like the way you keep it original…
Yaz…
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Thank you so much:)
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Whoa, amazing blog format! How long are you currently
blogging for? Your site is fantastic, and content materials are superb!
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Thank you so much 🙂
First one I posted on 27 of June
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Astonishing!
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Thank you 🙂
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