( MAN )
Look at me
I’m a picture of shame
I fell from the wall
I broke my frame
I lost my game
I lost my fame
My baggage is lost
That I couldn’t even claim
I’m biting my hands
I have no one to blame
I tried to pray
But it was not the same
“Graveyards are full of inevitable people “
( GOD ‘S AWNSER)
Yes look at you
Who’s talking
You forgot who you were
Flesh and blood made by clay
You lost the game
The one you didn’t play
Lost your fame ?
You were just a needle in the hay
You sold your soul for a name
You have become the devils prey
I gave you a chance
But you ran away
You wanted to pray
when your black hair turned grey
Oh, mankind
You have too many plans
For your shorter stay
YAZ
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Stunning, dramatic words!
Happy Easter!
Ciao
Sid
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Thank a lot Sid 🙂
You too ..happy Easter
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Well written, for humanity..
Nonetheless, conflicting interest to myself…
chris
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Thank you Chris 🙂
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Amazing picture language. Thanks for sharing.
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Your very welcome 😊
Thank a lot
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Muy bonito fin de semana to you Yaz 🙂
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Igualmente 😊
Gracias
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Wonderful, wonderful with so many ways to think about the meaning but still having a point that is so clear. God Bless you.
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Thank you so much Corrie ..your words always make me going 😊
Thanks a lot
Yaz
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“Too many plans…” Perhaps! Very powerful visual and verbal images!
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I wanted to portray the connection between the images and written story, thank you the coastal crone 🙂
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Nice work.
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Thank a lot 🙂
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Awesome words!
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Thank you 🙂
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Love man and God’s dialogue in your poems. Very heartfelt and so true.
(((HUGS))) and Happy Easter if you celebrate! 🙂
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Many many thanks ..I truly appreciate your comment 🙂
Happy Easter
Yaz
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Great thoughts, wonderful flow, and perfect rhyme.
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Thanks a lot ..I really appreciate it
Happy Easter
Yaz
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Fantastic, Yaz!
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Thank you Kunal 😊
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Great post, makes you think…
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Uncertain human destiny that only God may make sense to..
Poem well framed with a good rhythm.
In friendsjip
Michel
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Thanks a lot Michel …
I truly appreciate your comment .always
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great poem! love the last three lines…so very true indeed. thanks for sharing 🙂
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Thanks a lot ..I really appreciate it 😊
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So short, our lives, always so short….
Great words! 🙂
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that’s right very short
Thanks a lot
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Dramatic words but respect for all those men
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Thank you so much 😊
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This was very powerful, both the words and the picture. Thanks!
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Thanks a lot Ann 😊
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Hi Word Warrior. Really good poem. Too many have chosen the dark side. A price soon they will all pay! Thank you for liking my poem It started! Peace and Best Wishes. The Foureyed poet.
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Hi malctg Thank you for commenting! Yes a price thats too much to bear. Thanks For sharing your content… Peace brother.
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I love the way you make a point about humanity in your work. You very succinctly point out the weaknesses and strengths of our race. Beautifully done!
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Thanks a lot Claire for your encouraging words 😊
Yaz
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Powerful portrayal of mankind from God’s perspective. NICE!! ❤
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Many many thanks Amy 😊
I truly appreciate it
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❤ (((HUGS))) ❤
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Wow!!
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Thank you 🙂
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You’re welcome! Have a great day! 😀
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You too ..have a beautiful day 🙂
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Sad… but so beautiful.
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Thank a lot Amy 😊
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stunning poetry!
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Thanks a lot 😊
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amazing!
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Thank you 🙂
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Love Love Love! Double snaps
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Thank you so much 😊
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Please check out my related blog where you are mentioned: https://migrantthoughts.wordpress.com/2016/04/17/liebster-award/
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Many many thanks for the nomination ..I feel honoured ..thank you
yaz
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Beautiful words. ❤
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Powerful poetry. I love it.
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Thanks a lot 😊
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Love the God response. Epic
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