This moon has been a witness of countless stories
He has seen destruction & he has seen glories
If this moon could speak, imagine what he would say
When he saw us; we were walking
I held your hand & we were talking
He saw you look back , while you were leaving
No one could see you crying, but this moon has been watching
That night, this moon who has been a witness of countless crimes
He closed his eyes and he was crying
Yaz
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This is gorgeous, Yaz! ❤
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Thank you Carisa 🙂
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Yes, beautiful! The images come around and around like the moon itself. Well done!
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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Yes! She has witnessed highs and lows….and empathised all the time. 😉
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yes, I go with the “she” … startling to have a “he” here. Age-old traditions have usually made her a wise, calm “she” as opposed to the fiery “he” that is the sun 🙂
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This is so poignant!
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Thank you 🙂
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Beautiful like always.
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Thank you Corrie 🙂
Merry Christmas and happy new year
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Excellent!! If you can find the right musician, this would make a really good song.
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Thank you so much ..as your previous advise I am still working on it 🙂
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I couldn’t agree more. Yaz has a way of making words float 🙂
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Beautiful!
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Thank you 🙂
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Incredibly beautiful!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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written wonderfully 👌👌👌
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Thank you Neethu 🙂
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Beautiful…It truly resonated with me… Merry Christmas and all my best wishes to you. Aquileana 🎄🆒
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Thanks a lot Aquileana 🙂
Merry Christmas and Feliz navidad
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Your poem was so lovely.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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😉
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Great thoughts! Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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lovely. vw
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Thank you 🙂
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Impressive!
Ciao
Sid
P.S.: Merry, happy Christmas!
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Thank you so much 🙂
Happy new year
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This is amazing
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Reblogged this on Crazy Pasta Child.
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Thank you for this inspiring piece!!!!!!
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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It’s a great poetic idea. Of course, if the Moon really could talk, he’d be subpoenaed as a witness in court cases around the world. 🙂
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You words are brilliant and leave me wanting more. Thank you I feel like I’m right there in the poem and feel every word. Keep it up. Words are something we live by everyday and it’s nice to see that someone knows how to use them.
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Thank you so much 🙂
I really appreciate it
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My Brother and Dear Friend, this one hurt,
and I am glad the moon can’t see tonight.
I feel as if I were left here alone,
You are amazing,
Robert
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Thank you so much Robert 🙂
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Beautiful imagery.
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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Awesome photos, perfect for the poetry.
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Thank you so much Eileen 🙂
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Beautifully stirring! Happy New Year!!
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Thank a lot 🙂
You too happy new year
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😀
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Lovely, lovely web design in addition to words!
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Thank you so much Catherine ..I really appreciate it 🙂
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I draw inspiration from your site. With #gratitude, Catherine
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Thank you so much Catherine 🙂
I really appreciate it
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I feel the moon cry thru your gorgeous words …thank you , love , megxxx
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Thanks a lot ..thanks for your sweet words 🙂
I really appreciate it
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Thoughful and beautiful. Great image too!
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Thank you Anna 🙂
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Beautiful poetry Yaz.. wishing you a wonderful 2016 and beyond.. May it be filled with many Blessings.
Sue
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Thanks sue 🙂
Happy new year and keep walking on the clouds 🙂
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🙂 thank you so very much 🙂
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Thanks for sharing such a great photography that inspired my night.
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Thanks a lot Kah 🙂
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This fields with poppy’s we don’t see this anymore
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I love your graphic of the boat and man against the backdrop of the moon. A sad, contemplative poem and a beautiful one as well. My moon (if I can claim it) is also a ‘she’ … funny how our gender differs. 🙂 I need to write more poems … thanks for the inspiration.
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Thanks a lot 🙂 i really appreciate it
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Beautiful poem. That photograph goes well with it.
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Thank you so much Indira 🙂
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You have a way of invoking potent emotion. Love the image the words it inspires. Thank you for sharing.
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Thanks a lot For Your compliment ..i really appreciate it 🙂
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Great poem! I loved it! Thanks for stopping by my little corner of WordPress too!
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Thanks a lot Courtney 🙂
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Exquisite. I really do love this. Thank you for sharing your talent 🙂
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Thanks a lot for your kind words .i really appreciate it 🙂
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This piece spoke volumes to me today. What a pleasure it has been to read several pieces of your work now. When words are depicted so vividly that a reader is enraptured and feels every one, that is a special skill. It’s nice to meet you via wordpress. Belinda
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Thank you Belinda for your sweet and kind words ..I truly appreciate it
Nice to meet you too
YAZ😊
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Thank you Yaz for sharing your time with me, a treasured gift. 🙂
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Well we will keep in touch from now on 🙂
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The pleasure will be mine. 🙂
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Deep and moving with a twinge of sadness, but still it makes your heart understand the bittersweet. Thank for sharing Yaz 🙂
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Many many thanks for you sweet words ..they will make me keep going 😊
Thank you
YAZ
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Many many thanks for sharing …I truly appreciate it 😊
Yaz
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Wow….vry touching lines
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Thanks a lot
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