Stress headache and anxiety
What happened to the society?
Professional sinner and piety
Spirituality having dinner with brutality
Cheater is raping loyalty
A lie laughing at honesty
Necessity compromised with morality
Shame showing her skin for popularity
Cat gave up on her curiosity
Dishonesty dating dignity
Capitalist is a brother of royalty
They want to kill the poor not the poverty
Minority ruling over majority
Robber giving some charity
Killer talking about legality
People wanna be a celebrity
Celebrities running from reality
Love strangled by sexuality
What’s happening to our society?
Islam, Judaism and Christianity
Humanity should be our priority
Son of Adam wants more than his capacity
At the end all we need is, 6 feet of property
Call my name and you will have peace
God Almighty gave you the surety
Yaz
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Reblogged this on Dr Niamh's Plum Tree Creative Community and commented:
I happen to think this is a really interesting poem, soI thought I would share.
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Thank you so much ..I really appreciate it .i feel honored thank you 🙂
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Confusion abounds. Welcome to the new world we’ve made.
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I’m reading more of your posts and enjoy them all!
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Thank you I’m glad you liked em
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Wonderfully said! You found the right words about our society. Nothing to add.
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Thank you Alexander 🙂
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The ultimate truth in a few profound lines. 🙂 Your poems are very meaningful and send a strong message. 🙂
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Thank you so much .i really appreciate it
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I Like it.
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Thank you janean 🙂
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“They want to kill the poor not the poverty”
Well penned, and so true.
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Thank you genie 🙂
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Are you really a Guru 🙂 ?
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No, but, maybe I am, just like maybe you are. 😉
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Nice 😊 like it
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quote: “What’s happening to our society?”
That’s what I’m asking myself every day .. and I’m not even as long on this earth as you, I guess.
I’m convinced that I was raised in the wrong generation .. but can’t do anything about it, you know. Just have to say: I enjoy your poems, they’re really well written. Goes straigt to my poet`s heart 🙂
greetings maxithinks
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Thank you maxithinks for your kind and sweet words 🙂
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Powerful , strong yet raw in the most simplest manner. Love it. enjoying your posts one after another 🙂
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Ah thank you 🙂 I really appreciate it ..your feedback is like fuel for my thoughts 🙂
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I’m glad I can be of “fueling” assistance 🙂
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😊
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Powerful!
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exquisite
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This was very honest and beautiful! I loved it! You captured so many flaws of humanity stripping it naked and exposing it for what it really is and that they need only seek one true place, comfort and knowledge for peace.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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E’ sempre emozionante, soffermarsi sulle tue pagine
Buona serata e un saluto,silvia
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Muchas Gracias Silvia 🙂
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Well done. Love the relationships drawn between two opposites.
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Wonderful thought! Shades of Bahadur Shah Zafar (Mughal emperor-poet…) or Omar Khaiyyam.. Thank you for writing these thoughts. I feel the same at times.
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Thank you so much:)
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Some powerful, hard-hitting lines in this one. The comparisons you draw are interesting and thought provoking. We certainly live in a very confused world, in which many values (moral or otherwise) seem to have been turned topsy-turvy. Well written poem.
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Thank you Millie 🙂
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I think this is brilliant piece of work. Your username Words Warrior suits you 🙂 Thank you for dropping by my blog!
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I think this is a brilliant piece of work. Your username Words Warrior suits you 🙂 Thank you for dropping by my blog!
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Thank you so much AdiC 🙂
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I absolutely love this!
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Thank you Lynn 🙂
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Yes ,Humanity should be our priority, I so agree, what has happened to society? Excellent thoughts within your poem, May you continue to use your Warrior Wisdom in helping spread the word.. 🙂
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Thank you so much Sue 🙂
I really appreciate your sweet and kind words
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You are most welcome
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I love the poem, and the sketch of all the people.
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Thank you Karen
Thank 🙂
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Wow! Just wow! 😀 This could be a song you know! I could litterally feel a beat while reading it lol OK I have to share this one too! Bravo! 😀
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Lol thank you you so much cavelle
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You’re most welcome! 🙂
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Please, you have to meet my blogfriend Words Warrior! Rebloging for a 2nd time because he’s just THAT good! 😀
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Un’immagine particolarmente colorata, accompagnata da bei versi
Un saluto,silvia
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Muchas gracias Silvia 🙂
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Yaz, so much I’d like to say, but another minute is gone, and the sky falling….
You are the second man here on WordPress, that at some point in time, realized the hurried scribbled letters and numbers of homework so long ago, actually moved with your thoughts; but no, they didn’t. Then again, and you knew the truth, it was the WAY you wrote the words.
After that (I am only guessing, for each it is different), homework wasn’t so bad.
Soon, your words became an old man that smiled, as he baited a young boy’s hook, then smiled proudly as you caught your first fish.
One day, your words became a Happy Santa Claus, HO-HO-HO, as the young man stepped out into the cold; hoping he’d get the job, his mood brightened, as he watched the first flakes of the Canadian snow.
My Friend, never let anyone steal your rank;
few can train the recruits, the words that line-up and are your warriors.
Robert
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Thank you soooo much Robert 🙂
I really appreciate your thoughts and kind words
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Amazing poem! You depicted the reality using clever words and rhymes. Very well written!
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Thanks a lot ..I really appreciate it
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